Teaching and Learning: Conquest of Mexico: WRITING HISTORY
WRITING HISTORY: AN INTRODUCTORY
GUIDE TO HOW HISTORY IS PRODUCED
What Is History?
Most people believe that history is a "collection of facts about the past." This
is reinforced through the use of textbooks used in teaching history. They are written as
though they are collections of information. In fact, history is NOT a
"collection of facts about the past." History consists of making arguments about
what happened in the past on the basis of what people recorded (in written documents,
cultural artifacts, or oral traditions) at the time. Historians often disagree over what
"the facts" are as well as over how they should be interpreted. The problem is
complicated for major events that produce "winners" and "losers,"
since we are more likely to have sources written by the "winners," designed to
show why they were heroic in their victories.
History In Your Textbook
Many textbooks acknowledge this in lots of places. For example, in one book, the authors
write, "The stories of the conquests of Mexico and Peru are epic tales told by the
victors. Glorified by the chronicles of their companions, the conquistadors, or
conquerors, especially Hernán Cortés (1485-1547), emerged as heroes larger than
life." The authors then continue to describe Cortéss actions that ultimately
led to the capture of Cuauhtémoc, who ruled the Mexicas after Moctezuma died. From the
authors perspective, there is no question that Moctezuma died when he was hit by a
rock thrown by one of his own subjects. When you read accounts of the incident, however,
the situation was so unstable, that it is not clear how Moctezuma died. Note:
there is little analysis in this passage. The authors are simply telling the story based
upon Spanish versions of what happened. There is no interpretation. There is no
explanation of why the Mexicas lost. Many individuals believe that history is
about telling stories, but most historians also want answers to questions like why did
the Mexicas lose?
What Are Primary Sources?
To answer these questions, historians turn to primary sources, sources that
were written at the time of the event, in this case written from 1519-1521 in
Mexico. These would be firsthand accounts. Unfortunately, in the case of the
conquest of Mexico, there is only one genuine primary source written from 1519-1521.
This primary source consists of the letters Cortés wrote and sent to Spain.
Other sources are conventionally used as primary sources, although they were
written long after the conquest. One example consists of the account written
by Cortéss companion, Bernal Díaz del Castillo. Other accounts
consist of Mexica and other Nahua stories and traditions about the conquest
of Mexico from their point of view.
Making Arguments In The Textbook
Historians then use these sources to make arguments, which could possibly be refuted by
different interpretations of the same evidence or the discovery of new sources. For
example, the Bentley and Ziegler textbook make several arguments on page 597 about why the
1. "Steel swords, muskets, cannons, and horses
offered Cortés and his men some advantage over the forces they met and
help to account for the Spanish conquest of the Aztec empire".
2. "Quite apart from military technology, Cortés'
expedition benefited from divisions among the indigenous peoples of Mexico."
3. "With the aid of Doña Marina, the conquistadors
forged alliances with peoples who resented domination by the Mexicas, the leaders
of the Aztec empire...."
Ideally, under each of these "thesis statements,"
that is, each of these arguments about why the Mexicas were defeated, the authors
will give some examples of information that backs up their "thesis."
To write effective history and history essays, in fact to write successfully
in any area, you should begin your essay with the "thesis" or argument
you want to prove with concrete examples that support your thesis. Since
the Bentley and Ziegler book does not provide any evidence to back up their
main arguments, you can easily use the material available here to provide evidence
to support your claim that any one of the above arguments is better than the
others. You could also use the evidence to introduce other possibilities:
Mocteuzuma's poor leadership, Cortés' craftiness, or disease.
Become A Critical Reader
To become a critical reader, to empower yourself to "own your own history,"
you should think carefully about whether the evidence the authors provide does
in fact support their theses. Since the Bentley and Ziegler book provides
only conclusions and not much evidence to back up their main points, you may
want to explore your class notes on the topic and then examine the primary sources
included on the Conquest of Mexico on this web site.
Your Assignment For Writing History with
There are several ways to make this a successful assignment. First, you might
take any of the theses presented in the book and use information from primary
sources to disprove itthe "trash the book" approach.
Or, if your professor has said something in class that you are not sure about,
find material to disprove itthe "trash the prof" approach
(and, yes, it is really okay if you have the evidence). Another
approach is to include new information that the authors ignored. For
example, the authors say nothing about omens. If one analyzes omens in the conquest,
will it change the theses or interpretations presented in the textbook?
Or, can one really present a Spanish or Mexica perspective? Another approach
is to make your own thesis, i.e., one of the biggest reasons for the conquest
was that Moctezuma fundamentally misunderstood Cortés.
When Sources Disagree
If you do work with the Mexican materials, you will encounter the harsh reality
of historical research: the sources do not always agree on what happened in
a given event. It is up to you, then, to decide who to believe. Most historians
would probably believe Cortés letters were the most likely to be accurate,
but is this statement justified? Cortés was in the heat of battle and while
it looked like he might win easy victory in 1519, he did not complete his mission
until 1521. The Cuban Governor, Diego Velázquez wanted his men
to capture Cortés and bring him back to Cuba on charges of insubordination.
Was he painting an unusually rosy picture of his situation so that the Spanish
King would continue to support him? It is up to you to decide. Have the courage
to own your own history! Díaz Del Castillo wrote his account later in
his life, when the Spaniards were being attacked for the harsh policies they
implemented in Mexico after the conquest. He also was upset that Cortés'
personal secretary published a book that made it appear that only Cortés
was responsible for the conquest. There is no question that the idea of the
heroic nature of the Spanish actions is clearest in his account. But does this
mean he was wrong about what he said happened and why? It is up to you to decide.
The Mexica accounts are the most complex since they were originally oral histories
told in Nahuatl that were then written down in a newly rendered alphabetic Nahuatl.
They include additional Mexica illustrations of their version of what happened,
for painting was a traditional way in which the Mexicas wrote history. Think
about what the pictures tell us. In fact, a good paper might support a thesis
that uses a picture as evidence. Again, how reliable is this material? It is
up to you to decide.
One way to think about the primary sources is to ask the questions:
(1) when was the source written, (2) who is the intended audience of the source, (3) what
are the similarities between the accounts, (4) what are the differences between the
accounts, (5) what pieces of information in the accounts will support your thesis, and (6)
what information in the sources are totally irrelevant to the thesis or argument
you want to make
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