Student Paper SP001-07
Spring 2000, Section I
Reviewer Comments
Dare to Believe
Early philosophers changed the way citizens
thought. Before the Enlightenment period, many people accepted the way things
were and did not question there being. Rene Descartes believes everyone is born with
a good sense of their surroundings and everyone uses good judgment because it
is what differentiates us from animals. Descartes wanted to devote his life to
the truth so he would agree with others on social ideas because he could not
find answers to the questions. "We think therefore we are."1 Just
because the people making up the rules are of the higher social class, does not
mean they are right; especially when it comes too running the government.
Hobbes was a royalist who supported the Stewart kings. After the beheading of Charles I, Hobbes moved to Paris to write like most political refugees. Everyone is governed by his or her own reasoning. Hobbes believed that the more he learned the more ignorant he felt. Hobbes used his scientific thinking along with his reasoning to come up with his "ideal" society. I believe that Hobbes was a very jealous man. He only wanted to surrender his rights when it benefited him most. He did not care if it hurt the majority of the population as long as he gained from it. Hobbes also believed that it was not right to imprison people or execute because we as other individuals, do not know their exact motives. "We" do not know if they intended to kill us or not. Why make them suffer?
Locke believed that all men are in a state of
perfect freedom and are over their own actions, depending on their will. We are
also in a state of equality. No one has more power than the next. Birth rights
do not exist. Men are free to do what they please as long as they do not take
away others rights. Men do not have the right to punish others without just
mean.
Rousseau was philosopher who believed
everyone should be equal, everyone work together for the better of the society.
The "government" keeps the sovereign in touch with the subjects. The
general will of the people is what everyone wants. Everyone would be
self-educated. Great intellects would be the conscience of society. They would
help lead society not politically, but morally for the welfare of the society.
Political parties would not exist because it would weaken the society. This
form of government is more like a republic. A pure democracy could not exist.
Rousseau changed the way people thought the government should be ran. A
monarchy does not have to exist for the society to function as a whole.
Everyone knows and agrees that taxes should be paid, but taxes are equal for
everyone. Taxes are not collected randomly.
Philosophers opened up the thinking of minds
for thousands of individuals. Not only did this cause uproars and riots, but
scientific research came about. More ideals and inventions were created because
people were not afraid to think anymore. Being your own person was not allowed.
One must follow the rules of the land or he would be executed or exiled. Who is
to say what society functions better than another. I believe it all depends on
their beliefs and rituals. What works for one country does not mean it could
work for another country. All philosophers are writing to reach out to people
to believe in what they do. All four of these men created many problems for
individuals and societies, but in the long-run people believed in what they
wrote. Some whole heartedly while others
participated because they did not have anything better to do. Why not be a part
of history without knowing that is what was really being done, at the time?
In a sense, all of these ideas combined would
create a perfect society. A form of "utopia" for some. No matter how
good one believes his ideal is the best, it must be tested before it can b~ the
best. There will always be an individual who is not satisfied with the way the
government is ran. This individual will always be around to create havoc for
everyone else. Enjoy life while it is hew. Sure things can be better, but one
has to remember life, in general, could be worse.
1 Rene Descartes, Discourse on Method, (1637).
Bibliography
Descartes, Rene, Discourse on Method, (1637).
Hobbes, Thomas, Leviathan, Chaps l3-l4, (1651).
Locke, John, Two Treaties of Government, (l690).
Locke, John, Second Treaties on Government, (1690).
Locke, John, A Letter Concerning Toleration. (1689).
Locke, John, Some Thoughts Concerning Education, (l692).
Rousseau, Jean Jacques, The Social Contract,(1763).