Reviewer comments on student paper F992-10
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At first I thought it was going to cover the question about conflict. Then it moved to individualism but wandered from constitutions to women's rights to child labor.

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Reviewer #3

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Essay is a typical entry-student effort. Analysis and detail could and should be greater, but this is a good essay for a freshman.